I thought I would write about the story assignment. I believe I am really going to have to cut it down from the three installments that I handed in while in class. My story really only has two main scenes. One where the robot comes to life and interacts with the family and how bonding takes place. The second main scene or main idea of my story is that the little girl in the family whom the robot is supposed to be protective over hurts herself and starts crying. The robot comes over and decides that he must punish her for doing that to herself because after all, no one hurts his family. So then later that night the mom comes home to find her daughter missing and the robot is standing there, guilty as ever.
If I was to expand on any part of my story it would probably have to be the part where I describe the robot. It’d be nice if I had better describing skills in my back pocket because there is this image of a robot I want to portray but I is so difficult to get down on paper what I see in my head.
But I felt like my third installment of my story was mostly extra information that I will probably cut out in the end. I don’t feel like my story needs too much extra information. Straight and to the point works pretty well for my story. We will see how my revising goes. I know I still need to do some serious connecting – so that will add a good bulk of words. In the end, I hope everyone likes my story and is surprised by the ending!
